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The tendency of human beings to copy one another is shown in popularity of fashion in clothes and other consumer goods. Some people think that this has bring lots of waste in money and energy. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

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It is ubiquitous that
people
 copy each other in their lifestyles like
clothes
 and other items. Some
people
 argue that it is a sort of waste in terms of money and energy, and I
also
 agree with
this
 statement due to following reasons.
To begin
 with, the tendency to follow fashion idols wastes our money and energy, owing to the fact that blindly following fashion
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 by purchasing
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clothes
 which are not needed in our daily life can be seen as a totally wrong decision.
For instance
, it is unbelievable to see a youngster
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wear haute couture in his or her daily life, these kinds of
clothes
 are not suitable and necessary for the outlook.
Hence
, spending
larger
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 fortune on these
clothes
 is unnecessary and foolish, not only
waste
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 money and energy
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 but
also
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 time.
Therefore
, the copying tendency worsens
people
 lives seriously.
Moreover
, concerning
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 aspect, copying one another will lead to social identity which is largely strangling
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creativity. If
people
 just follow
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their idols and imitate their outfits,
thus
people
 wear same
clothes
 and shoes, resulting in die out of new fashion trend.
In other words
,
people
 would only accept
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such
copying
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 phenomenon, and they
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 to be creative and self-determining for their lives.
Consequently
, it would directly deteriorate
people
 consciousness and
social
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 environment as a whole. In conclusion, I still strongly believe that human tendency to follow each other is wasting valuable time and
further
 worsening
the
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social development.
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