Some say that it would be better if the majority of employees worked from home instead of travelling to a workplace everyday. Do you think the disadvantages outweigh the advantages?

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Advancement in technology has made life very easy because of that
people
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can
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anywhere.
Although
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, it is sometimes thought
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work
from
home
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is better rather than to go at office, others believe that
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employees
employers
should travel and go at
workplace
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the workplace
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. In my opinion, I considered that there are both positives and
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effects. There are several reasons why it is good for employees to
work
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from
home
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. The
first
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and foremost important thing is that saving
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. Workers do not need to travel for
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, so they can save
time
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for
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and family.
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,
people
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can do more than one
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at a
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through
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internet
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.
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, it provides tremendous benefits. Another point to
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is that
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work
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from
home
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is better
of
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for
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employess
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employees
means that they have a chance to
work
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in any
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corner
of the world.
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, in one survey has conducted in the UK,
people
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are choosing to
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in abroad and they need to go there, but
work
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from
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has given
option
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the option
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to
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employees
go
work
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in
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foreign
without travelling.
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, there are many applications available online, they can
work
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from those applications
instead
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of travelling to a
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workplace
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work place
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workplace
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.
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,
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,
work
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from
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has some demerits
also
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.
Firstly
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,
people
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do not
work
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on
time
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, as
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the employer
an employer
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employer
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employers
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not
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are not
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present with them to look after their
work
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.
Secondly
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, workers can not understand their
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colleagues
when they are working in
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a team
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, because they never meet them.
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,
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the employer
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employer
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employers
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can not see employees
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expression
and seriousness online for their
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. In conclusion,
work
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from
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has
numrerous
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numerous
advantages
such
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as spending quality of
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with family and can do
work
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any part of their country, not even in their country but across the world. While there are some
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disadvanages
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disadvantages
and it should not neglect.
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