Some people think that medical service should not be run by profit making campanies . Do the disadvantages of private health care outweigh its advantages??!!

It is usually argued that

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companies or

coorporations

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corporations

should not be allowed to function in the healthcare sector and it should only

run

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by governments or NGOs.I

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acknowledge

that it has a wide range of

benifits

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benefits

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,it has some drawbacks too.

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the advantages of private organizations working in medical services are much greater than

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disadvantages. We have many good

government

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hospitals

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in our country but when comparing it to the population size of India they are

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near sufficient,

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the need

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private

hospitals

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rise

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and we in our country are able to maintain a stable health care system only when

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as well as

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private sector work together in

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department.

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- When

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drive for conid-19 began we

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the country with the most number of vacciniations

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adminstared

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in the world which was a great achievement but was only possible because

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public was able to get the shot from

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as well as

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prvivate

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private

hospitals

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.

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treatments in Private

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is

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quite expensive.Not everyone can afford

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there and

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they totally rely on

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bodies only.

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this

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is true

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nowadays governments are coming up with policies which help people from economically weaker

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to get the same facilities and treatment that any

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finally

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well person is getting. Recently a new law was passed in my city which stated that if there is an accident victim can go to any nearby hospital and will be treated free of charge irrespective it is a

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or private hospital.

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would say it is a boon to have private

health care

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healthcare

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facilities in our society

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it is necessary

to

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for

government

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organizations to regulate

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institutes so that

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they

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do not exploit

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power and under

priveleged

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privileged

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also

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not left behind.