Lack of fresh water is becoming a global issue of increasing importance. What problems does this shortage cause? What measures could be taken to overcome these problems. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Nowadays, there has always been considerable discussion in terms of the growth seriousness in clean
water
scarcity all over the world.
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the significant effects and give some substantial solutions for the above issue.
Fresh
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water
shortage can be responsible for some severe problems which are relevant to agricultural and industrial aspects.
Firstly
, if there has a poor supply of
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water
, farmers cannot grow any crops, together with the mass death of animals.
Besides
,
water
shortage
also
leads to the starving of many people, so it is impossible to create profitable yields for cultivation.
Secondly
, in the absence of sufficient
water
, mineral exploiters, food suppliers, manufacturers and distributors of electricity may find it difficult to operate their business.
Therefore
,
water
has a direct impact on
economic
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sector. Rainwater harvesting is one of the main
factor
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of dealing with
water
shortage, many areas with very little groundwater reserves can greatly improve the way they harvest rainwater by building larger facilities and incorporating better technologies.
In addition
, farmers need to capture and dispose of floating pollution in
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waterway
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, so we have to design a lot of useful means acting as a barrier for floating
water
pollution.
Moreover
, many people in rural areas have extreme difficulties in accessing
to
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clean
water
source
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;
consequently
, donating to a charity to construct wells, sanitation and agricultural systems will help them solve these problems.
Furthermore
, more developed countries having a higher level of technological advancements can help out greatly by sharing their advancements with developing countries.
Last
but not least, spreading the message by educating better on the causes and effects of the
water
crisis, as well as what they can help. So they in turn can teach others and raise awareness. In conclusion,
the
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fresh
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water
scarcity increases alarmingly throughout the world and we must give many solutions for protecting the
water
source.
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