In some cities and towns all over the world, traffic jams are a problem. What are the causes of this and what actions can be taken to solve this problem?

The world is vigorous changing

everyday

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.

However

, there are some negative sides that affect adversely to many metro cities over the world, one of them is

traffic

congestion. In

this

essay, I will discuss the mại reasons

of

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this

problem and

then

describe some positive solutions to tackle

this

issue. The foremost cause of dense transport is the need

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people

to physical transport. As the matter of fact, most

people

in metropolitan

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cities

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own and use their private cars for their daily travel

such

as working, studying or even make an excursion.

This

results in

traffic

congestion

especially

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during rush hour.

Secondly

, careless driving is another potential reason that causing transport delay. The fact that when an

accidents

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emerges, it will

attracts

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individuals' attention and

therefore

makes the road overcrowded. To exemplify, around 80% of

traffic

accidents are caused by driver error, which puts thousands of

people

off, leads to a terrible jam. To tackle

this

problem,

firstly

, the local governments should try their best to improve

traffic

infrastructures in these areas, where the number of

traffic

accidents has suddenly risen recently.

For example

, when the road is improved and widened, there will be more space and

this

lessons unfortunate impacts.

Secondly

,

people

should use

bicycle

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bicycles

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instead

of cars.

This

benefits humans not only in reducing

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, but

also

enhancing our health. In conclusion,

traffic

jam is a huge problem that influences a lot of

people

in many cities over the world. It's mainly caused by

people

's

demand

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and careless driving.

Hence

, we must act now to solve

this

issue.