In some cities and towns all over the world, traffic jams are a problem. What are the causes of this and what actions can be taken to solve this problem?

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The world is vigorous changing
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, there are some negative sides that affect adversely to many metro cities over the world, one of them is
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congestion. In
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problem and
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describe some positive solutions to tackle
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issue. The foremost cause of dense transport is the need
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people
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to physical transport. As the matter of fact, most
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in metropolitan
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own and use their private cars for their daily travel
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as working, studying or even make an excursion.
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results in
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congestion
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during rush hour.
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, careless driving is another potential reason that causing transport delay. The fact that when an
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emerges, it will
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individuals' attention and
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makes the road overcrowded. To exemplify, around 80% of
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accidents are caused by driver error, which puts thousands of
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off, leads to a terrible jam. To tackle
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problem,
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, the local governments should try their best to improve
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infrastructures in these areas, where the number of
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accidents has suddenly risen recently.
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, when the road is improved and widened, there will be more space and
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lessons unfortunate impacts.
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,
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should use
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instead
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of cars.
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benefits humans not only in reducing
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, but
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enhancing our health. In conclusion,
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jam is a huge problem that influences a lot of
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in many cities over the world. It's mainly caused by
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's
demand
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and careless driving.
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, we must act now to solve
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issue.
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