Recently you issued a cheque to someone, but when that person presented the cheque to the bank, it was returned with these words ‘Returned for lack of sufficient funds”. You are sure that there is sufficient balance in your account. -Write a letter to the bank manager. In your letter, -give him particulars about your cheque -tell him that the cheque has bounced for no valid reason -request him to look into the matter

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Dear Mr John, I am writing you concerning an

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about a

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I issued

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week Tuesday, to a friend of mine. The

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number is T101202112 and it was dated 25th July 2021, while the name on it is Babajide

Adelu

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Adele

. To be honest, I was quite amazed that the

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bounced with the comment, "Returned for lack of sufficient funds".

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, I wasn't only amazed; I was quite angry because I still have about twenty-five million in that current account, meaning your cashier bounced the

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for no valid reason.

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, as a matter of urgency, I would kindly request that you have a look into

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matter and clarify what the

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or issues might be. If it is an

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with my

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, do let me know,

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I am sure

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can't be the case.

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, if the

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is with your bank, kindly rectify it and let me know the outcome. Thank you for your time as I expect your feedback on

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situation. Yours Sincerely, Rotimi

Kemi111Wed Nov 24 2021

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Lexical resource: 7.0

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