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The given chart illustrates the comparison between birth and death rates from 1901 to 2101. The concerned country is New Zealand. Overall, there is a fluctuating apply birth estimate from 1901 to 2101. Meanwhile, the death quota shows a significant increase throughout the years. Respectively, the birth amount has been rising at a stable rate for over 10 years
then
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 reach a peak in 1961 with over 70%. Later on, the numbers gradually lower in 1981 before rising again in 2001. It is expected to be reducing till 2101 to almost 40%.
On the other hand
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, the Death percentage represents more steadily surging from 10% to approximately 30% by the year 2001.
In addition
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, it is believed to keep skyrocketing to 60% in 2101.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Trend
  • Pattern
  • Fluctuation
  • Increase
  • Decrease
  • Comparison
  • Relationship
  • Correlation
  • Significant
  • Implication
  • Prediction
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