as countries develop, more and more people buy and use their own cars. Do you think the advantages of this trend for individuals outweigh the disadvantages for the environment?

it is irrefutable that, In advanced pace world, transport is a vital part of human beings life.

However

,

the

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own vehicles were

harmful

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impact

on

nature

.

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, demerits outshine merits. Commencing with the most prominent reason why mankind's was purchased own private Vehicle

cars

and motorbikes are lethal for

impact

on

environment

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.

Firstly

, the humans buy own

cars

was directly effect

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on

nature

. Due to= the smoke came out in

cars

is harmful to health and

nature

.

Also

rapidly increasing the

pollution

.

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the

use

of private Vehicles and community, make a decision on

this

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odd and even formulas to control the

pollution

.

Secondly

, the

impact

on health, smoke was effective on lungs and take oxygen.

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and most of them lethal for old person's. Because, in

this

age , someone was patients of asthma and other diseases.

Moreover

,

thirdly

, not only the

traffic

was increased but

also

humans face difficulties.

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going their jobs and youngsters going to school and college. They can be late in

traffic

. Owing to, most of the difficulties to emergency patients ambulance was stuck in

traffic

conjunction.

Lastly

, the decrease of public buses, because the majority of individuals was using own

cars

to reach their destination.

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generally

impact

of countries economy and

traffic

was on

impact

on

nature

because in

traffic

use

of horns was created noise

pollution

. In conclusion,

although

the own

cars

and bikes are beneficial, in

this

modern era ,

however

, I think

this

was

also

harmful

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nature

and health and the government should be starting awareness program to aware the society, because, they can

use

their own vehicle to doing his works.