Traffic and housing problems could be solved by moving large companies, factories and their employees to the countryside. Do you disagree or agree

In our ever-changing world, increased

traffic

and lack of housing

problems

have been the major

problems

in many countries. By relocating the large firms, factories and their workers to the rural area, these issues can be properly tackled.

However

,

in

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the same time, I believe that there are other initiatives

should

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be implemented to help

solvin

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solving

solve

this

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traffic

and housing

problems

effectively. It is unequivocal that moving the big businesses and their facilities can cause the urban population to shrink substantially, especially the big-named companies which employ a lot of people

such

as Apple,

SamSung

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Samsung

or LG Display.

This

,

as a result

, can relieve the pressure on the urban housing supply system. Another apparent advantage of a decreased population is the reduction of global

environment

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catastrophe

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catastrophes

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such

as global warming, greenhouse effects, climate change and so on. Take Hanoi- the capital of Vietnam

for example

, as

majority

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city-dwellers

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of city-dwellers

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use their own

vehilces

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vehicles

to commuting

this

leads to overcrowded roads during the rush hours. An as the result, Hanoi is now facing one of the biggest environmental

problems

, air pollution.

However

, if the big companies

based

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in the countryside and offer

accomodation

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accommodation

near the company for their employees,

problems

can be solved.

Nontheless

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Nonetheless

, the idea of relocating the large firms and

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facilities to the rural are justifiable, I personally

belive

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believe

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the aforementioned

problems

are complicated and it can only be properly addressed by

such

other measures.

First

and foremost, the local authorities should invest in programs which are designed for developing the road system in the area since the narrow road can be blamed for the contributions to

traffic

jams and accidents. Building wider roads and motorways can

helps

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reducing

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volumes of private vehicles and

traffic

congestions. Another initiative that can be mentioned is establishing more

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residential

areas which can accommodate a growing population in the city centre or near the industry zone.  In conclusion, moving the big firms and their own facilities

such

as factories and workers can

mitigates

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the

problems

,

however

, as I mentioned above, we need a combination of

this

approach and the number of other actions to tackle these issues in

more

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comprehensive manner.