Recent figures show an increase in violent crime among youngsters under the age of 18. some psychologist claim that the basic reason for this is that children these days are not getting the social and emotional learning they need from parents and teachers. To that extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowedge or experience

Today’s society has been pressured into resolving numerous tough and sensitive issues that have become stronger and negatively affected

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all people, especially the young generations who are living in the information and digital age without necessary control and

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from their parents and teachers. It’s undeniable that families and schools play paramount roles in children development in their personalities and psychology, which forces the under 18-year-old to walk on the criminal road unless having it.

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, a host of considerable reasons in relation to the constantly changing society, technology and

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regarded as the big contribution to the climb in young criminals. The family is commonly considered as the most influential element

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how a child is nourished and able to develop his characteristics in the future.

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, there are more and more unexpectedly detrimental factors including parents-related relationship problems, unbeatably attractive modern gadgets and the hustle and bustle of

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21st-century lifestyles, which results in parents’ less concentration and proper

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on their children.

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, the significantly increasing pressure on exam results stemming from the peers and the teachers at schools has been occupying most of the attention rather than emotional and psychological

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for the students. Children under the age of 18 in

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century are really facing a wide variety of social and emotional problems than their early counterparts, but it seems that they are standing alone against

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most of the negative impacts from the exam-oriented

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system, the serious lack of teachers’ instructions and orientation on personal development. In conclusion, the rapid advancements in technology, the continuously changing living styles and the

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systems discouraging individual and moral development together with

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in parents’ and teachers’ social and emotional teaching have been becoming some of the most

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causes which lead the youngsters to be more violent and become criminals in the near future.