You have had a problem with your next-door neighbour. You have not been able to speak to your neighbour about this. Write a letter to this neighbour. In your letter: - Explain the problem - Suggest a solution - Say what action you will take if the situation does not improve

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Dear Mr John, I am writing to complain about your weekly party, which was noisy. I am your

neighbor

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living

to your house and have been living here since 1988.

However

, I am sorry to tell you that there

was

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were

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no problems until you have moved in

last

year.

Firstly

, I noticed that you always arrange a party with your

friends

every Friday night. It would not cause a problem if you are not turning on music loudly

untill

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until

midnight.

This

was annoying.

Besides

, your

friends

' cars often park at my gate, which causes me

moving

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my car hardly.

Therefore

, I suggest you turn off

music

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the music

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after 10.00pm. I understood that you would like to enjoy dancing and singing with your

friends

However

, you should respect your neighbour too.

Besides

, it would be great if you could tell your

friends

to park

thier

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their

cars at your place.

Finally

, I was trying to understand your circumstances , and I hope that you would understand your neighbour as well.

Hence

time, If you still make noise after 10.00pm, I will call the police because I have

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the rights

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rights

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to do so. I look forward to hearing from you. Sincerely, Jenny Lee

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

200 words

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