You have had a problem with your next-door neighbour. You have not been able to speak to your neighbour about this. Write a letter to this neighbour. In your letter: - Explain the problem - Suggest a solution - Say what action you will take if the situation does not improve

Dear Mr John, I am writing to complain about your weekly party, which was noisy. I am your
neighbor
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neighbour

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living
next
to your house and have been living here since 1988.
However
, I am sorry to tell you that there
was
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were

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no problems until you have moved in
last
year.
Firstly
, I noticed that you always arrange a party with your
friends
every Friday night. It would not cause a problem if you are not turning on music loudly
untill
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until

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midnight.
This
was annoying.
Besides
, your
friends
' cars often park at my gate, which causes me
moving
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my car hardly.
Therefore
, I suggest you turn off
music
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the music

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after 10.00pm. I understood that you would like to enjoy dancing and singing with your
friends
.
However
, you should respect your neighbour too.
Besides
, it would be great if you could tell your
friends
to park
thier
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cars at your place.
Finally
, I was trying to understand your circumstances , and I hope that you would understand your neighbour as well.
Hence
,
next
time, If you still make noise after 10.00pm, I will call the police because I have
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rights
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to do so. I look forward to hearing from you. Sincerely, Jenny Lee
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