Many claim that the fast food industry had a negative effect on the environment, eating habits, and families. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

Fast food is said to be a subject of intense debate among many people in which it causes issues to

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the environment

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, eating

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or family ties. Contrary to

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small number of individuals who insist on it as a must for today’s lifestyle. It is crystal clear that the more consumption of things occurs, the more production is needed. The more production happens, the more contamination remains. So, the demerits of

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industry

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confirmed chiefly. There

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number of people who believe

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like French fries or

chick

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thick

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strips would have some downsides to communities. They persist that as these

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are greasy, salty and prepared in

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amount of time, the process of cooking may not have passed properly and these items may

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to be harmful to

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of society. They

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consider

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production as a

tie breaking

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factor to

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of a family. By

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they highlight that

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of a family used to participate in preparing the meals together and

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agile eating causes spending less amount of time with each other which may cause less cooperation. Reviewing these demerits, it is accepted that the negative points of fast food clearly overshadow its merits. Contrary to the oppositions of rapidly prepared

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outside houses, there are some minorities who support semi-cooked items.

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eagerness would be rooted in the

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hectic lifestyle which harm individuals mental and physical condition. Not spending enough amount of time to digest the food and just receive the

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salary

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surge individuals to an undesirable situation that people eat to live and work without paying attention to what they eat. So,

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idea fails to absorb more

supporter

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. To recapitulate, being a consumer of unhealthy

foods

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such

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as fried semi-prepared fish or chicken can cause some degradation to people`s living standards

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as lowering family sympathies, eating regulations or even environmental concerns. So, it is visible that negative effects outweigh the positive ones.