The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given charts provide information about the consumption
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nutrients and components which citizens in the USA
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absorbed on the daily basis. Significantly, A similarity can be witnessed between
Sodium
and Saturated fat with the consumption in each meal,
while
added sugar was completely different. Dinning time quite bore a resemblance when those ingredients accounted
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most with 43% for
Sodium
and 37% for fat saturation.
Similarly
, morning eating ranked
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2nd
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position of eating
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in the USA. The figure
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fat was seen with a bat lower than
Sodium
, 26% respectively, followed by supper time with 21%. And breakfast ranked the
last
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fat. Regarding the proportion of
Sodium
, Breakfast and Snacks not only were the least preferred options but they
also
marked the same quantity with 14% each. Unlike the others, Added Sugar was most preferred in tea¬-time when took more than 40% and in dinner didn't account for much with 23%. Breakfast and lunch
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of the rest with no remarkable proportion.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words sodium with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • nutrients
  • unhealthy
  • typical meals
  • percentages
  • saturated fats
  • fibers
  • sugars
  • impact
  • average
  • consumption
  • trends
  • breakfast
  • lunch
  • dinner
  • highest
  • lowest
  • variation
  • implications
  • balanced diet
  • recommendations
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