Some people believe the aim of university education is to help graduates get better jobs. Others believe there are much wider benefits of university education for both individuals and society.

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To Whomsoever It May Concern I am pleased to write a letter of recommendation for Poola Manoj Vamsee, who has been my student for his bachelors at SRM Institute of Science and Technology, Kattankulathur. As his faculty advisor, I have had a close affiliation with him. Unequivocally, I have seen him grow as a responsible student during

this

period. In the

first

semester of his bachelors, he spoke to me about his passion for technology and the ways he wants to contribute and solve problems for society using technology. Manoj has not only been diligent but

also

actively coordinated with other departments and verticals at the organization, demonstrating his effective coordination and communication skills. At times, if needed, he never hesitated to ask for help that showed his humbleness. I believe he has what it takes to achieve academic brilliance and that he is acquainted with the foundations for the MS in Computer Science program which he wants to

persue

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pursue

peruse

This

program will not only level up his knowledge in the field but

also

will be a stepping stone for him to pursue even higher goals. Owing to his resolve, credibility and integrity, I feel honoured to be writing

this

recommendation for him. Please feel free to contact me for any

further

information or discussion. Sincerely,

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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

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Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

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Fully explain your ideas

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