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Some people believe the aim of university education is to help graduates get better jobs. Others believe there are much wider benefits of university education for both individuals and society.

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To Whomsoever It May Concern I am pleased to write a letter of recommendation for Poola Manoj Vamsee, who has been my student for his bachelors at SRM Institute of Science and Technology, Kattankulathur. As his faculty advisor, I have had a close affiliation with him. Unequivocally, I have seen him grow as a responsible student during
this
 period. In the
first
 semester of his bachelors, he spoke to me about his passion for technology and the ways he wants to contribute and solve problems for society using technology. Manoj has not only been diligent but
also
 actively coordinated with other departments and verticals at the organization, demonstrating his effective coordination and communication skills. At times, if needed, he never hesitated to ask for help that showed his humbleness. I believe he has what it takes to achieve academic brilliance and that he is acquainted with the foundations for the MS in Computer Science program which he wants to
persue
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pursue
peruse
.
This
 program will not only level up his knowledge in the field but
also
 will be a stepping stone for him to pursue even higher goals. Owing to his resolve, credibility and integrity, I feel honoured to be writing
this
 recommendation for him. Please feel free to contact me for any
further
 information or discussion. Sincerely,
Submitted by manojvamc on

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