You work at home and have a problem with a piece of quipment that you use for your job. Write a letter to the shop or company which supplied the equipment. In your letter -describe the problem with the equipment -explain how this problem is affecting your work -say what you want the shop or company to do

#work #home #piece #quipment #job #shop #company #equipment #-describe #-explain #-say

Dear Sir, I want to bring to bring to your kind notice that electronic device Dell Laptop model no: Latitudinal 506734, with invoice no. AP76230, which i have purchased from your company MG electronics is not functioning properly and often disrupts while working. As, Iam working from home during these times of pandemic, it was causing troubles while switching on and creating bizararre noises, internet wifi connectivity is lost during working on it.

As a result

, my office work is delayed and i want prepare sales report for my meeting with client which is scheduled

week.

Accordingly

, my office collegues are often getting annoyed and creating complains to higher managment and are threating to replace me with other team member if my problem persists and not resolved immediately.

Therefore

, I request you to come and check my laptop along with replace my laptop with a new piece, as it is under warranty of 2 years and fully complies to all terms and conditions of the policy. Looking forward to hear from you soon. with Best Regards, yours faithfully Deepak chandana Mobile: 5248963178.

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