Every year several languages die out. some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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of British Columbia. I am going to submit my application shortly. I have one problem though. Unfortunately, I am unable to pay the required application fee. You probably know about the financial hardship situation in Iran.

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card or any international account for the payment. I would like to ask you about the possibility to waive the fee or defer the payment until my arrival in Canada. Thank you very much for your help and understanding. Sincerely, Samin

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

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Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

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Topic Vocabulary:

Linguistic diversity
Cultural heritage
Language extinction
Communication barrier
Linguistic imperialism
Endangered languages
Language revitalization
Monolingual
Multilingual
Language preservation
Homogenization
Language policy
Cultural assimilation
Intangible heritage
Indigenous languages
Globalization
Dialects
Localization
Language documentation
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Every year several languages die out. some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Fully explain your ideas

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more and more tasks we do at home or at work these days are done by robots. Is this a positive or negetive development?

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