Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience
It is best to accept a bad situation
such
as an unsatisfactory job or shortage money
. Change preposition
of money
First
, if we take unsatisfactory work, we have less competition with each other. From there we will reduce stress. Secondly
, for those of you who do not have any special talents, it is also
a suitable choice. Nowadays, in companies that make a lot of money
, people tend to choose talented people. Last
but not least, people tend to live less competitively, live a minimalistic life
, money
is not an important issue so it's everyone
's way of life
. Let's take my neighbor
as an example. In the past, he was a very good employee at many things. But many nights, he had to stay up late to work. But now, he has chosen a bad job or less Change the spelling
neighbour
money
so since then
he has more and more time to himself. It is better to try and improve situation
. Add an article
the situation
Firstly
, I think that when we strive to improve something, our quality of life
will improve. Secondly
, we will feel meaningful when we have a wonderful life
. Last
but not least, everyone
around you will admire you, and you will be the pride of everyone
in the family. Our lives will improve both mentally and physically. In my opinion, I like solving problems because from there, it improves my life
for the better. A few years ago, my brother was unemployed and had to work as a security guard for a small company. But, he chose to learn English well and since then
my brother has worked as a translator for big companies.
In conclusion, this
essay has both views. Everyone
chooses a different way of life
. I think we can solve the problem to have a good life
as desired. I quite like solving problems for a better life
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