Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience
It is best to accept a bad situation
such
as an unsatisfactory job or shortage Linking Words
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money
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of money
First
, if we take unsatisfactory work, we have less competition with each other. From there we will reduce stress. Linking Words
Secondly
, for those of you who do not have any special talents, it is Linking Words
also
a suitable choice. Nowadays, in companies that make a lot of Linking Words
money
, people tend to choose talented people. Use synonyms
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but not least, people tend to live less competitively, live a minimalistic Linking Words
life
, Use synonyms
money
is not an important issue so it's Use synonyms
everyone
's way of Use synonyms
life
. Let's take my Use synonyms
neighbor
as an example. In the past, he was a very good employee at many things. But many nights, he had to stay up late to work. But now, he has chosen a bad job or less Change the spelling
neighbour
money
so since Use synonyms
then
he has more and more time to himself. It is better to try and improve Linking Words
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Firstly
, I think that when we strive to improve something, our quality of Linking Words
life
will improve. Use synonyms
Secondly
, we will feel meaningful when we have a wonderful Linking Words
life
. Use synonyms
Last
but not least, Linking Words
everyone
around you will admire you, and you will be the pride of Use synonyms
everyone
in the family. Our lives will improve both mentally and physically. In my opinion, I like solving problems because from there, it improves my Use synonyms
life
for the better. A few years ago, my brother was unemployed and had to work as a security guard for a small company. But, he chose to learn English well and since Use synonyms
then
my brother has worked as a translator for big companies.
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Everyone
chooses a different way of Use synonyms
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. I think we can solve the problem to have a good Use synonyms
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as desired. I quite like solving problems for a better Use synonyms
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Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
The easiest way to score well on the IELTS Task 2 writing portion is to structure your writing in a solid essay format.
A strong argument essay structure can be split up into 4 paragraphs, each containing 4 sentences (except the conclusion paragraph, which only contains 3 sentences).
Stick to this essay structure:
- Paragraph 1 - Introduction
- Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
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- Paragraph 4 - Conclusion