Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future such as those related to science and technology. discuss both views and give your opinion

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On the one hand, housing and accommodation complexes are shrinking in size from one-story villa complexes to single bedroom apartments.

As a result

, the public requires the outdoor spaces to sit and relax after a day-long hectic schedule together with their family members and well-wishers.

Moreover

, these parks should be well equipped with all sorts of the exercise instruments like the treadmill and outdoor gym

equipments

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to enable the general public to perform physical exercise regularly and become fit as well as productive to work.

Consequently

, the municipal and civic authorities should invest heavy budgets in constructing these infrastructures, which will eventually assist in physical and mental fitness and

hence

nations growth and development is progressing by achieving high productivity of individuals at workplaces. On the one hand, public spaces like amusement and society parks, shopping malls serve as places to visit for

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, restaurants as well as clothes stores which will raise Govt. revenue through the collection on sale of products.

Furthermore

, the general public benefits from different stores by purchasing a variety of items that may be different in quality and price.

Therefore

, it will increase the healthy competition among store sellers which eventually lead to lowering prices significantly assisting customers.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

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In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future such as those related to science and technology. discuss both views and give your opinion

Include an introduction and conclusion

Some people think that parents should teach their children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the best place to learn this. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

The plans below show a student accommodation building in 2010 and now.

In many countries today, the eating habits and lifestyle of children are different from those of previous generations. Some people say this has had a negative effect on their health. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Nowadays, a growing number of people with health problems are trying alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting thier usual doctor. Do you think this is a positive or negative development ?