In some countries, small town-centre shops are going out of business because people tend to drive to large out-of-town stores. As a result, people without cars have limited access to out-of town stores, and it may result in an increase in the use of cars. Do you think the disadvantages of this change outweigh its advantages?

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ecame

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more preferable o

n

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travelling to large shopping centres located far away from them to buy products rather than visiting small

shops

near their area. Even though

this

trend provides some benefits, I believe that the drawbacks are more significant.

Firstly

, leaving small

town

-centre

shops

abandoned will have a negative impact t

o

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conomy

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growth of the

town

. The profit of selling goods in these facilities will decrease significantly, leading to lower salaries for the staff.

This

movement will motivate workers in these

shops

to quit their job, causing a rise in the unemployment rate, which is particularly harmful f

or

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the development of some local shop chains, or even the

town

’s shopping industry. Admittedly,

this

trend does have some benefits. Customers will be provided with a wider range of choices, which is a p

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payback

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ay back

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for the l

onger

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distance they have to travel. Shopping in these large shopping malls out of the

town

are said to be more c

onvinient

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convenient

and faster in comparison with in-

town

shops

w

ere

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trading activities are restricted.

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, i

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impact on the environment is rather tragically. People are forced to use more cars and they will have to travel more on a daily basis to afford their needs.

Therefore

, there will be a rise in the carbon dioxide gas e

mmision,

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emission

emissions

which will accelerate the global warming process, or even at the very least, will contaminate the air quality of the

town

.

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, in the villages near ShangHai city in China, the increasing popularity of cars h

as

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l

ead

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to a t

erible

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terrible

air quality. People l

ive

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in these villages are likely to suffer from diseases like lung cancer or constant cough. In conclusion, even though customers will find it more enjoyable shopping in large supermarkets out of

town

, the consequences of

this

movement i

s

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rather tragically. In my opinion, shopping in local stores is a better way to buy goods.