7.Write a letter to a book store manager who is living in another city. Ask him/her to make available a book that you are interested in. In your letter, you should tell: – What book you are looking for? – Why you need this book? – How you plan to purchase the book?

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Dear James, I am writing to you concerning some books that I would like to buy from your store. I am specifically looking for the Arc of Ambition

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by Jack Code. Do you by any chance have

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? Actually, I belong to a reading club and

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for the month. We have been told to read it before our

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meeting, while I will be leading a discussion on it.

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as soon as possible, read it and prepare for my discussion time. While waiting for your response to my query about if the

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online, I do hope you have

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option of payment? Since you are in another city and travelling down to pick the

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isn't an option for me. I will be expecting your feedback soonest and do let me know how you plan to convey the

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to me. Thank you and have a nice day. Yours sincerely, Rotimi

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

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Task Achievement: 9.0

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183 words

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