The pie charts below show the comparison different kinds of energy production in France in 1995 and 2005.

The pie charts below show the  comparison different kinds of energy production in France in 1995 and 2005.
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The pie chart illustrates different kinds of energy produced in France in 1995 and 2005.
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, a glance at the chart reveals that different variations are evident. At the beginning of the period producing coal was the most significant sector
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at the end
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of the period.
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, Petro declined steadily from 1995 to 2005. The coal sector accounted for 29.80% of
France
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energy production in 1995 and experienced a more than 1per cent increase to 30.93% in 2005. Manufacturing gas made up 29.63% in 1995 and witnessed a slight increase to 30.31% in 2005. At the beginning of the energy-producing period, nuclear reproduction and other constructions were 6.40% and 4.90, respectively,
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up gradually to 10.10% and 9.10% in 2005. Petro, which compromised almost less than a
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in 1995, fell to 19.55% in 2005. All in all,
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there was a slight increase in most of the segments, petro experienced an opposing situation.
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