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You have recently started work in a new company Write a letter to an english-speaking friend. In your letter Explain why you changed jobs describe your new job tell him/her your other news

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Dear Ellie, I'm writing to inform you that I've started my new job, leaving
old
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my old
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 one. The main reason for
this
 change, I was quite bored with
daily
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the daily
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 routines of my old jobs as I must prepare monthly statements every month according to the guidelines of
International
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the International
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 Accounting standard;
therefore
, I was very bored with the repetitive nature of it.
Besides
 account preparation, my payment was
also
 poor. My new job offers multiple types of duties, which helped me to explore the business environment and inform management of the required changes
business
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in business
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 needs.
This
 helps me to analyse
market
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the market
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, competition and others for my company if companies want to improve their own performances. You know about my analytical capabilities from
school
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my school
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 days. My brother has recently introduced me to my
life-partner
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life partner
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, and we are going out for six months or so. Please, let me know what's going on in your life. Best of luck! Byron
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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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