The office you work in does not have any cafeteria for staff. Write a letter to your manager to request setting up a cafeteria for the staff. In your letter, you should tell • what you heard about the inconvenience from the staff • how you feel about it • what suggestions you have about setting up a cafeteria

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to you regarding a request to set up a cafeteria
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our office premises. Recently,I was a part of a monthly review of our team and I noticed that after the review many people went out for lunch or for a cup of tea.
Furthermore
, I
also
heard from people that they do not bring lunch because in our office there is no place to eat.
This
problem is of serious concern among the employees. I feel bad for people who go out for their food every afternoon as it can have a detrimental effect on their health.
However
,
this
problem can be solved by carrying out a survey among employees for their preference for many options like cafeteria theme, type of coffee machine and selection of area for the cafe.
This
will not only increase their happiness index but
also
will increase their productivity. I really hope that you will consider
this
suggestion and will take an appropriate step. I look forward to hearing from you soon. Yours faithfully, Mark Thomas
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