A government’s role is only to provide defence capability and urban infrastructure (roads, water supplies, etc.). All other services (education, health, social security) should be provided by private groups or individuals in the community. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
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the digitalisation
arrival
of different social media platforms, the world has become a smaller place. It feels like the whole world is at your fingertips. Correct article usage
the arrival
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situation also
puts extreme pressure on a government because the media are everywhere. This
essay discusses about
dividing certain sections between public and private to provide them at ease.
For the overall development in a country or improving its Remove the preposition
apply
citizens
life quality, a ministry has to run all the different kinds of departments at the same time and Change to a genitive case
citizen's
citizens'
hence
they always fail to meet the expectations of the general population. Certain services
should be given to private organizations to run. Although
giving away control of some department
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risky, but previously many governments have excelled by approaching Correct your spelling
seem
this
method carefully and with maximum planning
it can yield wonderful achievements. Certain areas like planning for the country's defence, strengthening of national infrastructure and public health sector should be handled by authority. Education, social Add a comma
,planning
services
, public transport can be distributed between experienced private groups.
Decreasing work load
from a particular task is directly proportional to the increased efficiency in that task. By arranging a group of volunteers or retirees to work for local social security Correct your spelling
workload
services
in the community, we may be able to kill two birds with one stone as they will also
feel productive. By privatising education
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the education
Indian
regime has gained a lot after 2013. Private entities ensured every child had access to get registered for a school in their respective area. Correct article usage
the Indian
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helped them to ramp up their literacy rate. Private schools provide exceptional
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government
. Providing water and electricity to every citizen should be their primary objective.
politics should Correct article usage
the government
also
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state
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assigned to prevent corruption before it occurs.Correct your spelling
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