You have paid for a cricket course at a Sports Club, but due to a medical reason cannot complete the entire course. Write a letter to the course director. In your letter, explain your interest in the course describe your problems find out if a refund is possible

#cricket #course #sports #club #reason #director #interest #refund

Dear sir, I am writing you

this

letter to bring to your attention

about

Change preposition

apply

show examples

my inability to continue the cricket course that I have enrolled for the summer break at Sports Club due to some emergency medical condition. I am very keen to join

this

course as Sports Club have the city best Highly Certified Trainers that can improve my overall gameplay which can provide me great exposure. Coming to the problem, recently, I was playing football with my school friends, and I have severely injured my leg. I went to the doctor, and he said that I have a Torn ACL. I am currently not able to walk straight, turn or pivot. I would be grateful if you can provide me with a refund as the doctor has suggested surgery and given me a rough timeline of about six months for a full recovery. I hope to hear from you soon. Yours faithfully Aman Asati

Submitted by amanasati77 on Tue Dec 07 2021

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »— a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

Do you want to check your IELTS essays?

Submit unlimited essays, letters and charts. Sign up right now and start improving your writing skills.

1Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Grammar mistakes
 

8 paragraphs

156 words

0123456789.0505

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

🚀 Prepare for IELTS writing section today!

Unlimited Task 1 & Task 2 checks
Practice with essays, charts, and letters.
Personalized suggestions & mistake analysis
Spot every mistake and boost your score.
Topic ideas & vocabulary helpers
Expand your ideas and use the right words.
Progress tracking
Watch your writing improve with every practice.

What to do next:

Look at other essays:

7
band
You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You would like to buy some electrical goods at a shop in a nearby town. Write a letter to the shop and - ask if they have the things you want or whether they will be able to order them. - --- Ask what the prices are and - how long they will be able to hold the goods for you.
I am writing to inquire about some electrical goods that I would like to purchase from your store as soon as possible.
6.5
band
Robots can free people from difficult and dangerous work. However, some people are worried about the possible dangers robots may create. Discuss the benefits of using robots and the possible dangers from it.
The employment of automatic machines is developing in this current era. Some people argue that robots will improve the manufacturing rate and perform complex tasks that can not be done by humans. Besides that, it also argued that several drawbacks could be classified as a hazard for human daily life. This essay will discuss the privileges and constraints of utilising automatic machines.
6
band
You found a job opportunity in a foreign country. Write a letter to your friend who knows about the country. In your letter explain your situation describe your problems tell him/her when you will be starting the job
Do you remember that we worked on my LinkedIn profile as I may find my favorite occupation? I can't thank you enough because I have been selected for the job. Guess what! It is in Paris, France. I got so nervous discovering that I have to move to France and remote working is not available for this specific position. But then I remembered that you used to live there for 5 years when you were student at university. So, I think I need your help again.
6
band
Universities should accept equal number of male and female students in every subjects. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
The strength of Male and Female Students in every subject would be the same or not is a smouldering issue of Today's social life and is extremely arguable due to its Unquestionable significance. This matter is being agreed as well as disagreed by the society according to its own ideologies and views.
7.5
band
Some people think that the goverment should strictly control the supply of fresh water, as it is a limited resource , while others it should not be regulated. Discuss both the sides and give your opinion
Due to rapid development, the supply of natural and freshwater is running low. Some individuals argue that authorities should take control and impose restrictions on the use of H2O. In contrast, others believe that there should not be any limitations. This essay will discuss my perspective and the related reasons.

You have paid for a cricket course at a Sports Club, but due to a medical reason cannot complete the entire course. Write a letter to the course director. In your letter, explain your interest in the course describe your problems find out if a refund is possible

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Robots can free people from difficult and dangerous work. However, some people are worried about the possible dangers robots may create. Discuss the benefits of using robots and the possible dangers from it.

You found a job opportunity in a foreign country. Write a letter to your friend who knows about the country. In your letter explain your situation describe your problems tell him/her when you will be starting the job

Universities should accept equal number of male and female students in every subjects. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people think that the goverment should strictly control the supply of fresh water, as it is a limited resource , while others it should not be regulated. Discuss both the sides and give your opinion