You have paid for a cricket course at a Sports Club, but due to a medical reason cannot complete the entire course. Write a letter to the course director. In your letter, explain your interest in the course describe your problems find out if a refund is possible

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Dear sir, I am writing you

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letter to bring to your attention

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my inability to continue the cricket course that I have enrolled for the summer break at Sports Club due to some emergency medical condition. I am very keen to join

this

course as Sports Club have the city best Highly Certified Trainers that can improve my overall gameplay which can provide me great exposure. Coming to the problem, recently, I was playing football with my school friends, and I have severely injured my leg. I went to the doctor, and he said that I have a Torn ACL. I am currently not able to walk straight, turn or pivot. I would be grateful if you can provide me with a refund as the doctor has suggested surgery and given me a rough timeline of about six months for a full recovery. I hope to hear from you soon. Yours faithfully Aman Asati

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

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To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

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for example
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

156 words

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