Your child is going on a three-day school trip to another country. The head teacher wants to find parents to go with the group and you would like to go. Write a letter to the head teacher. In your letter: • Say why you would like to go on the trip • Suggest what you could do to help during the trip • Ask other questions about the trip

Dear sir, How are you?I hope you are fine . I am
forwaiting
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forwarding
for waiting
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letter to bring to your notice my child is going on a three- days tour
to
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the
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outside the country and I would like to go
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him with. My name is XYX and I am a father of ABC. My child is now a 6th class student at school and my heart is going on
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on 3.12.2021&7.12.2021 between and you want to find family members go with I would like to go with us because I am good care all children about the trip. I am a doctor and I am helping the children
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any health
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issue
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Aa well as I am already visited in-
countrythe
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country the
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last
year during
trip
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I help you sawing anything about other things. And please give me any suggestions about
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soon and any conditions you need about
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please contact my number 34678899.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Enthusiastic
  • Chaperone
  • Itinerary
  • Accommodations
  • Logistics
  • Overseeing
  • Cultural exchange
  • Assist
  • Supervise
  • Engage
  • Responsibilities
  • Bilingual
  • First aid certified
  • Emergency protocols
  • Team-building activities
  • Communication skills
  • Safety measures
  • Childcare experience
  • Transport arrangements
  • Educational objectives
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