Car ownership has increased so rapidly over the past thirty years that many cities in the world are now one big traffic jam. How true do you think this statement is? What measures can governments take to discourage people from using their cars?

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ownership over

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three decades.

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, many cities around

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the world

faced

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with

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enormous traffic problems.

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agree

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with

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statement because the report from the news and

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The solutions for federal authorities to deal with

this

problem is to improve public transportation and add up

car

's price.  Traffic jam becomes one of the urgent problems among many countries because there is an

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in the

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of cars.

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can be proved by the

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grater

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number in automobiles sales together with many pictures from the news showing how many hours people have to get stuck in their cars. To illustrate, in the past, it only took twenty minutes for driving from Bangkok to Nonthaburi but

todays

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today

you have to spend at least one hour which is three times from the past in order to get to the same destination.

Therefore

, I strongly believe that

this

statement is completely true. Government should take immediate action to solve

this

problem.

First

of all, they have to develop a transport system. Public transportation should be provided efficiently for everyone at

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suitable price. When everybody can access

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transport easily, there will not be necessary for them to have their own

car

.

For example

, travelling in Soth Korea where the busses are well organized, it is no need to have a

car

whereas it is impossible for

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of developing countries to use public busses.

Secondly

, the tax

of

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purchasing automobiles should be added up in order to reduce their sales rate because people have to think twice before paying too much money

on

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something.

As a result

, they will not purchase their own automobile and turn to use alternative ways of travelling. In conclusion, I think that traffic jams resulting from the augment of

car

ownership

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definitely true due to many reports and state should improve the public transportation system and multiple cars' price in order to overcome

this

problem.