In some developing countries,it is difficult to get teacher to work in rural areas which can have a negative impact on the education of children in those rural communities. why do you think good teachers do not want to work in rural areas in developeing countries?what could be done to solve this problem?

In developing countries,It is difficult to get a tutor to a job in villages field because It is a bad effect on the study students In my opinion,they do not need
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appointment in backwards space because the government do not provide good stuff for a king society. On the one hand,education is most important to all people because It is the main purpose about success in the future but In some successful
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do not get teachers to post In lowest
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Explain It,development countries only prefer to big cities and they do not understand ruler community they only prefer to little bit facilities
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example, In my country, many education building and owners provide all good but as well as In my country village side schools open but not have a more opportunity's about the future and 65% academy close in ruler
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and provide to all happiness and facilities like good air-conditioner,desk,and building.Results
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because they
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face any problems.
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