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Art is considered an essential part of cultures throughout the world.However ,these days fewer and fewer people appreciate art and turn their focus to science,technology and business. why do yo think that is? what could be done to encourage more people to take interest in the arts?

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The debate of
art
 importance and its various shape has been a serious issue for
people
 and cultural experts. I believe that there is a couple of reasons that show why
people
 pay a low level of attention to
art
 and relevant subjects, in today's generation. In
this
 essay, I am going to bring some solutions for
this
 problem. The
first
 reason why
art
 is put in
next
people
's priority is their hectic lifestyle. Today, because of industrial and mechanical life,
people
 have to spend most of their time in the workplace. As a consequence, they cannot allocate enough time to recognize
art
 and its respectable values. Another reason that indicates why
art
 is not concerned in
people
's daily life is their tendency to get high profits and money.
In other words
, nowadays,
people
 seek to save more money and provide suitable facilities for their families.
Accordingly
, they need to learn business knowledge and use technology to make the works easier.
Subsequently
,
art
 does not have enough worth for them. It seems that the governments can play a basic role to solve
this
 issue .They should execute free courses related
art
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 for students in universities or schools. In fact, students have more free time than adults to study history and the value of
art
.
Also
, the governments can provide some life-giving programs and entertainments with fair expense in
art
 environments
such
 as museums, theatres and
art
 galleries.
As a result
,
people
 will be able to make a closer relationship with
art
 worlds like music, cinema, painting and other
art
 fields .
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