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Some people say young people should be completely free to choose their future job but others think young people must be more realistic in their choice. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

#people #future #job #choice
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considered
 by some that people have the total right to
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decide
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job
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complete
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life
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suppose
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life
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 when they choose their
job
. I take the view that everyone should have the
freedum
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freedom
 to choose their own career and people don't have to be b. On the one hand, the
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decision
freedum
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freedom
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everyone
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especially
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 to the future
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care
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behand
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that is
 that people,
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probably
, will spend their whole
life
 at
this
job
.
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Therefore
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shuld
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should
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about
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 it.
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 in a place he didn't choose
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by
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might
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his ability to
work
 and his personal
life
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the
 other hand, getting
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essential
 for some. To
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 their perspective, they think that
teenager
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teenagers
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shuold
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should
 know that finding a place to
work
 on the
job
 that they like is not possible all the time
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because
 they
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believe
 that knowing
this
 thing helps in
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preventing
 any
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disappointment
at
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the
their
 future. In my
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perspective
,
Firstly
 I think the
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final mission
finalisation
 for the
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future
carrer
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career
 should be the
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person
prison
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despite
 anyone else
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option
.
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Secondly
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, teenagers should
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believe
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 that
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despite
 any factors
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happend
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happen
happened
happens
, they can
work
 on whatever they want if they try to do so,
althoug
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although
 it might be hard,
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they
there
 will
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eventually
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they
 keep trying. In
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conclusion
, choosing
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 career is the person's
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responsibility
 and no one
shuold
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should
 take
this
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anyone
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any one
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anyone
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esle
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else
 and being
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realistic
in
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 choosing the
job
 is
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not
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no
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not
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neccessary
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necessary
 because
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a human
the human
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human
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humans
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 can do
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anything
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any thing
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anything
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 whenever they
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believe
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belive
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believe
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 in that.
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