Some people think it's better to choose friends who always have the same opinions as them. Other people believe it's good to have friends who disagree with them. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

In the 21st century,
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is changing
day
by
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at the same time our
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towards
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others
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are
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become
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become
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more complex.
Although
, some people believe that a
person
with
similar
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approach brings good
friendship
but others believe disapproval of a
person
's judgement makes good mates . In
this
essay, I will explain both of these
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However
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companionship greatly
influence
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our
day
to
day
life because it will reflect
choice
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the choice
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of actions, mode of behaviour and personality traits of a
person
.
Therefore
,
supporting
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from mates gives confidence, optimistic thoughts, generosity and
trustworthy
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trustworthiness
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towards society.
For instance
, according to Erickson, a famous psychologist and the father of social psychosocial theory, 'peer group with similar opinion brings good behaviour changes among children like happiness, excitement, cheerful and it curtails negative traits like sorrows, grievance and dishonest'.Admittedly, it is true that having a good friend is essential for everyone's life
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where as
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,
this
can make life more beautiful.
Moreover
, selecting a good
person
is important because the more we care about you, the more he thinks about your
well
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wish. Apparently, every individual is unique so
approach
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approaches
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and
views
are always different.
Beside
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this
, if someone loves or respect you irrespective of their disapproval of
views
that is
also
a true
friendship
. To illustrate
this
, most of the leading politicians in India they
are always keep
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their
friendship
together but against their political
views
. Ostensibly, they are arguing in front of
Indian
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the Indian
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parliament and the
next
day
they are attending public meetings together. So having different
views
are not
obstacles
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for
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making good
friendship
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friends
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. In conclusion, there is a saying 'a coin has two sides'
similarly
a
person
's
views
makes either constructive or destructive changes.
Therefore
, whoever
making
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decisions make sure that it is up to them but at the same time respect or
listen
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your friends with
kind
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a kind
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heart.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • bond
  • support
  • unconditional love
  • shared values
  • mutual understanding
  • trust
  • emotional well-being
  • interdependence
  • societal norms
  • companionship
  • loyalty
  • advice
  • experiences
  • mentorship
  • trustworthy
  • reliable
  • reliable
  • cherish
  • strengthen
  • deepen
  • attach importance to
  • prioritize
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