Some people think it's better to choose friends who always have the same opinions as them. Other people believe it's good to have friends who disagree with them. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
In the 21st century,
world
is changing Add an article
the world
day
by day
at the same time our relationship
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relationships
towards
others Change preposition
with
Change the verb form
is
are
Change to the active voice
become
have become
become
more complex. Change the form of the verb
becoming
Although
, some people believe that a person
with similar
approach brings good Correct article usage
a similar
friendship
but others believe disapproval of a person
's judgement makes good mates .
In this
essay, I will explain both of these views
with relevant examples.
However
companionship greatly Add a comma
,However
influence
our Change the verb form
influences
day
to day
life because it will reflect choice
of actions, mode of behaviour and personality traits of a Add an article
the choice
person
. Therefore
, supporting
from mates gives confidence, optimistic thoughts, generosity and Replace the word
support
trustworthy
towards society. Replace the word
trustworthiness
For instance
, according to Erickson, a famous psychologist and the father of social psychosocial theory, 'peer group with similar opinion brings good behaviour changes among children like happiness, excitement, cheerful and it curtails negative traits like sorrows, grievance and dishonest'.Admittedly, it is true that having a good friend is essential for everyone's life Correct your spelling
whereas
where as
, Correct your spelling
whereas
this
can make life more beautiful.
Moreover
, selecting a good person
is important because the more we care about you, the more he thinks about your well
wish. Apparently, every individual is unique so Change the adverb
good
approach
and Fix the agreement mistake
approaches
views
are always different. Beside
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Besides
this
, if someone loves or respect you irrespective of their disapproval of views
that is
also
a true friendship
. To illustrate this
, most of the leading politicians in India they are always keep
their Change the verb form
are always keeping
friendship
together but against their political views
. Ostensibly, they are arguing in front of Indian
parliament and the Correct article usage
the Indian
next
day
they are attending public meetings together. So having different views
are not obstacles
Fix the agreement mistake
obstacle
for
making good Change preposition
to
friendship
.
In conclusion, there is a saying 'a coin has two sides' Replace the word
friends
similarly
a person
's views
makes either constructive or destructive changes. Therefore
, whoever making
decisions make sure that it is up to them but at the same time respect or Wrong verb form
makes
listen
your friends with Add the preposition
tolisten
kind
heart.Add an article
a kind
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