Some people think it's better to choose friends who always have the same opinions as them. Other people believe it's good to have friends who disagree with them. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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, according to Erickson, a famous psychologist and the father of social psychosocial theory, 'peer group with similar opinion brings good behaviour changes among children like happiness, excitement, cheerful and it curtails negative traits like sorrows, grievance and dishonest'.Admittedly, it is true that having a good friend is essential for everyone's life

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can make life more beautiful.

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wish. Apparently, every individual is unique so

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your friends with

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Your opinion

Don’t put your opinion unless you are asked to give it.

If the question asks what you think, you MUST give your opinion to get a good score.

Don’t leave your opinion until the conclusion.

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...do you agree or disagree?...do you think...?...your opinion...?

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10
Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
4
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Grammar mistakes
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

7.5

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

5 paragraphs

311 words

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Some people think it's better to choose friends who always have the same opinions as them. Other people believe it's good to have friends who disagree with them. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Your opinion

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Computers are being used more and more in education. Some people say this is a positive trend, while others argue that it leads to negative consequences. Discuss both sides of this argument and then give your own opinion.

A friend has invited you to a birthday party, but you will be able to attend. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: Thank your friend for the invitation Explain why you won’t be able to attend Suggest another time to see your friend.

In many parts of the world, women study science and technology, but donot work in these fields. What measures can be taken to encourage women to work in science and technology?