Many families move to different countries. Some people think children can benefit from this, while others consider it is hard for children if families move to a foreign country. Discuss both views and your opinion.

Migration is
general
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tend
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trend
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over
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the world.
although
people are moving to different
countries
for various
purpose
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,sometimes they move with family
member
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members
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and intend to live there.
However
,few individuals believe the trend of relocation would be beneficiary
while
others think migrating to another country with family could be harmful for
children
.I
thus
believe moving
children
to a different country with the family will be devisee.
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this
essay will discuss both opinions and illustrate my own opinion. To commence with,in many developing
countries
citizens have
common
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tendency to move to the rich state
for staying
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there because
in
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developing
countries
provides
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huge facilities for
its
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own citizens.
For example
, if you move to
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the Uk
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Uk
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UK
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with your family you will get many lucrative benefits which
is
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education and medical facilities free of cost which is not provided in third-world
countries
.
As a result
,
Children
can
grown-up
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in a
loudable
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loud
ambience and get a chance to apply their creativity and eventually, they become
a good human beings
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a good human being
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.
Therefore
, I would say migrating
children
with family
come
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up with great advantages.
On the other hand
,Other individuals
intend to
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believe if families make plans
for living
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abroad
then
kids could suffer more
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to an unknown environment.
however
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, it is obvious that in the migration process most of the time kids have to face forceful circumstances during moving abroad
this
is why departure process reasonably difficult for infants.
For instance
,
moving
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from Asin to Europ
countries
children
will suffer from cold issues because they are not used to surviving
with
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such
cold weather.so sometimes migration could be damaging for the
children
.
To conclude
,in my
opinion
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opinion,
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moving to foreign states
beneficial
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benefits
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outweigh to drawbacks because if
children
stay in wealthy
countries
it leads to
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a better life and
enhance
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enhances
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their quality of education. they can expose themself to the competitive world.
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  • adaptability
  • cultural awareness
  • disruption
  • educational systems
  • emotional well-being
  • broaden perspectives
  • open-minded
  • personal growth
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  • rootlessness
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