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Today more and more tourist are visiting places were conditions are difficult, such as Sahara Desert or Antarctica. What are advantages and disadvantages of it

#tourist #places #conditions #sahara #desert #antarctica
Nowadays more and more
tourist
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tourists
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 are visiting
places
were
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where
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conditions
 are difficult,
such
 as Shahara Dessert and or Antarctica. In
this
 essay, I will discuss
about
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advantages and
disadvantage
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disadvantages
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of
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it
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. The
adventage
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advantage
 of tourists
are
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visit
place
were
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where
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conditions
 are difficult.
Firstly
, experience
travel
 in
the
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extreme condition
places
. When they
visit
 there, they can know and understand about it and
then
 they can have more experience
travel
.
For example
,
Sahara
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 Desert is a very hot
place
 or
in
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the
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Antarctica is
very
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 cold
place
.
Then
 they can know when
go
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 to
travel
 in hot or cold
places
 need to prepare kind of objects, clothes and foods.
Secondly
, protect nature. when they
visit
 and know about it they will respect and protect the nature in their location. The disadvantage of tourists
are
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visit
place
were
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conditions
 are difficult. The
fist
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, there are no
hospital
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hospitals
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,
hotel
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hotels
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,
restaurant
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restaurants
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 or
bus
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buses
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, so it is
inconvinience
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inconvenience
 to buy food, rest
place
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places
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 and only walk. it makes
tourist
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tourists
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 very tired and not good
to
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 their health. The
second
, get sick easily
first
 time people
travel
 in the extreme
place
 like too hot or too cold are difficult to adapt
, and
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 they can sick,
headeach
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headache
, cough or fever.
Finally
, it is dangerous, those
places
 are in
the
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nature, there are many animals can attack them.
For example
 wolf, bear or tiger. In
conclution
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conclusion
, Today
tourist
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tourists
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 are visiting
places
were
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where
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conditions
 are difficult more and more. it has
advantage
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advantages
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 and
disadvantage
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disadvantages
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.
However
, in my opinion, the tourists need to
training
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 skills and prepare enough food and protective gear.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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