Some people fell that boarding schools (where students or pupils live at the school during the term) are an excellent option for children, while other people disagree for a number of reasons. Consider both sides of this debate and reach a conclusion.

Nowadays, Residential
schools
, where students have to stay during an academic year have attracted
most
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attention and some
parents
select them as the perfect place to educate their
children
.
However
, the issue is not entirely straightforward, and arguments can
also
be made against the idea.
This
essay will discuss the positives and negatives of both views and provide a concluding view. On the one hand, people who
are agree
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with sending
children
to boarding
schools
believe that
this
kind of educational
places
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provide
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many facilities and benefits (bring many benefits/advantages) for
parents
as well as
children
. These range from addressing (meeting) the need for daily transportation to school and help in completing the homework to being more in an academic place with peers. In
this
kind of
schools
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, pupils can get an academic assist from their teacher whenever they
need
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.
Furthermore
, they spend
free
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time in more productive ways, including exercising, learning foreign languages, painting and singing. They learn how to live more independent and encounter
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difficulties. Examples can be seen in
Russia
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schools
where
parents
prefer to send offspring
in
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boarding
schools
rather than the conventional (traditional) ones.
Conversely
, opponents of
this
view utter some drawbacks of
such
schools
.
Parents
may not meet their
children
for several months and will not be informed
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happenings in their
children
’s daily life.
Therefore
, they lose control
on
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them and can not train them according to their family’s culture and tradition.
Furthermore
, some
children
particularly the younger ones might feel isolated, get depression and suffer mental disorders
,
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if they were
admited
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admitted
to boarding school. Indeed, growing up in
such
schools
will not be accompanied by emotional satisfaction to a child.
In addition
, staying full time in
school
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puts educational pressure on
children
that may influence their health. In conclusion,
although
boarding
schools
substantially assist
parents
in raising their
children
, they are not the perfect option since they cause a large communication distance between
parents
and child and have
irreversible
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effect
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effects
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on
children
’s health. It would appear that the disadvantages of sending students to boarding
schools
far
outweighs
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the minor advantages that it provides.
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