Some people fell that boarding schools (where students or pupils live at the school during the term) are an excellent option for children, while other people disagree for a number of reasons. Consider both sides of this debate and reach a conclusion.

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Nowadays, Residential
schools
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, where students have to stay during an academic year have attracted
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attention and some
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select them as the perfect place to educate their
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.
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, the issue is not entirely straightforward, and arguments can
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be made against the idea.
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essay will discuss the positives and negatives of both views and provide a concluding view. On the one hand, people who
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with sending
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to boarding
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believe that
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provide
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many facilities and benefits (bring many benefits/advantages) for
parents
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as well as
children
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. These range from addressing (meeting) the need for daily transportation to school and help in completing the homework to being more in an academic place with peers. In
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schools
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, pupils can get an academic assist from their teacher whenever they
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.
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, they spend
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time in more productive ways, including exercising, learning foreign languages, painting and singing. They learn how to live more independent and encounter
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difficulties. Examples can be seen in
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schools
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where
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prefer to send offspring
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boarding
schools
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rather than the conventional (traditional) ones.
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, opponents of
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view utter some drawbacks of
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schools
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.
Parents
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may not meet their
children
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for several months and will not be informed
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happenings in their
children
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’s daily life.
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, they lose control
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them and can not train them according to their family’s culture and tradition.
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, some
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particularly the younger ones might feel isolated, get depression and suffer mental disorders
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if they were
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admitted
to boarding school. Indeed, growing up in
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schools
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will not be accompanied by emotional satisfaction to a child.
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, staying full time in
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the school
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puts educational pressure on
children
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that may influence their health. In conclusion,
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boarding
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substantially assist
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in raising their
children
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, they are not the perfect option since they cause a large communication distance between
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and child and have
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effect
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effects
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on
children
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’s health. It would appear that the disadvantages of sending students to boarding
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far
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the minor advantages that it provides.
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