2.2 More and more students at university today are not choosing to study science. Why is this happening? What are the effects of this?

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In the past, the majority of parents always encouraged their children to study in

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fields

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, the number of students in higher education selected for

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programs these days continues to reduce.

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essay will first look at the reasons why

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happens, and

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explore the potential effects that having fewer

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students can cause. The primary reason that studying in branches of

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less and less common is the changing attitude towards education. In the twentieth century, those who studied in related

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faculties

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medicine,

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and engineering were considered to be honourable people and usually offered high salaries and high job

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those who graduated from other

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were left behind. Fortunately, millennials see things differently. They give more valves to other majors and choose those for their choices. They learn that studying other courses , apart from

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provide them with high income and respect

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. A declining number of

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learners causes a great shift in job industries. Researchers, scientists and other relevant careers in the

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field will be in high demand and eventually shortage which would lead to fewer technological developments.

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, the number of those who graduated from other faculties,

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as Arts , Business Administration ,and Law, will rise and contribute to several developments in their countries.

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, educational perspective development plays an important role in

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shift causing lowering numbers

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learners and employee

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in specific

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, it is a blessing in disguise because

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development in different

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will come up and will lead to sustainable development.

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Your essay provides a partial response to the task by addressing the reasons for the decline in science students, but it could benefit from a more comprehensive exploration of the effects of this decline. Ensure that all aspects of the prompt are covered in sufficient depth.

coherence cohesion

The introduction and conclusion are present, but the introduction could be more engaging and clearly outline the main points of the essay. Additionally, the development of supporting ideas throughout the essay could be made clearer and more cohesive.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

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Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

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4 paragraphs

273 words

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2.2 More and more students at university today are not choosing to study science. Why is this happening? What are the effects of this?

Computers are often argued to be the most important invention of the last hundred years. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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The most important aim of science should be to improve people's lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

The school library is seeking applicants for a job over summer break. Write a letter to the library’s manager, in your letter include: – A brief introduction of yourself – Your experience and relevant skills – Why you want the job