You have just read an article in an international travel magazine which contained some information about your town that is incorrect.

Dear Sir, I am Shravan Yadav, Resident of Mira Road, Thane.
This
is regarding your recent article published in your magazine dated 13.12.2021, regarding an international hotel, has been operational in our local area.
However
, I am residing in
this
locality for the
last
20 years and I am well aware of all development and operational facilities like an international hotel, club,
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and malls. I would like to inform you that there is no
such
international hotel is operational or being opened in our local area. Sir, I request you to kindly correct
this
information
, since our locality is well connected to some of the tourist attraction which is frequently visited by international travellers
also
. I am afraid that
this
information
may misguide and cause inconvenience to visitors. I
also
would like to put my suggestion that kindly publish
this
information
on your website and inform your subscribers through email or messages so that they can take precautionary actions for the same. In your
next
publish,
this
needs to be highlighted with correct
information
in order to make aware people
about
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this
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faithfully Shravan R Yadav
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