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You have a full-time job and you are also doing a part-time evening course. You now find that you cannot continue the course. Write a letter to your teachers. In your letter describe the situation explain why you cannot continue at this time say what action you would like to take You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear .................,

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Dear Mr Mohamad, I am writing to let you know that I am not able to continue your course
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 semester. Knowing that I have to
work
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 all day to accomplish all new tasks for my company, so will prevent me to study well.
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, I thought that the best decision right now is to drop it.
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 of all, the company where I
work
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 decided to put me in a higher position. Of course,
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 means that there are new missions and goals coming as well as it will take much more time than the previous
work
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.
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, my boss told me that maybe
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 new position will require overtime
work
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 in the future. I think that the above factors are enough to consider that I am not able to continue the evening class. Studying your lessons and preparing your homework is hard to attain with my new job.
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, I have chosen to put an end to my educational career at
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 point and wait until the
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 year to reapply. I hope you can accept my course withdrawal request.
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, I would love to see you teaching me
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 year. Yours sincerely, Hassan Tarhini
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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