You have lost an item of value on a train. Write a letter to the railway company. In your letter. • Describe the item • Explain where and when you left it • Say what action you would like the company to take

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Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing

this

letter to inquire about an item which I have lost while I was travelling on the train. It is a 22k gold neckless with a

heart shaped

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pendant, including a blue

color

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stone in the middle of it. The chain is made with

ovel

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novel

cuts and

about

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22cm long.

Further

, there is

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engraved

letters

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near the locker namely, "MK". It is a cherished item for me as I received it from a dearest friend of mine. I was travelling from Colombo to Kandy on 12th Wednesday by train scheduled at 4.30 pm

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when I misplaced it. I was in the D2 cabin and only noticed that it is not there as soon as I got off the train.

However

, as I can remember the chain was there when it was about 2km to the destination and

thus

I think I lost it while trying to leave the cabin. Kindly help me to find it since,

usually

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the lost items are delivered to the station and if you could put up a notice with my contact details so, that if anyone were to locate it can reach me.

Your

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Yours

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sincerly

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sincerely

Malsha

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Marsha

Masha

Munasinghe

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The Closing

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Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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4Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
11Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

198 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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You have lost an item of value on a train. Write a letter to the railway company. In your letter. • Describe the item • Explain where and when you left it • Say what action you would like the company to take

The Closing

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Computer and Al technology are increasingly being used for online education. Can artificial intelligence enhance the learning experience? Is this positive or negative development?

Nowadays, when popular consumer products sell well, it is not because of societal requirements but because of advertising's influence. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people believe that violence on television and in computer games has a damaging effect on the society. Others deny that these factors have any significant influence on people's behaviour. What is your opinion?

In some countries owning a home rather than renting one is considered very important what are the causes of this? Is this a positive or negative development?

It was predicted that with the development of technology, people in the 21st century would have much more free time than past. To what extent has this prediction come true?

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