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The plans below show the layout of a university's sports centre now and how it will look after redevelopment. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

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The diagram illustrates the University of Sports centre’s advanced plans, including present and future plans.
Firstly
, consider improved limitation space using and compared with the present facilities regions. To advance Western and Eastern side outdoor courts to an enormous leisure pool and sports hall.
Also
, two more changing rooms will be put on the Southwestern and Easter-southern corner.
In addition
 to adding two new functions room business shop and café shop in front of reception each side rare by corner changing rooms.
Moreover
, extended the Northern bottom Gym room to the Eastern bottom beside two new Dance studios
Secondly
, in terms of requested kept 25 Meters with Changing room and Setting in front of the entering door behind reception. To summarise, after
this
 enhanced exchange, all leisure facilities will be Maximum to operation with a specific capacity as well as, will improve leisure centre’s revenue in straightforward ways.
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