The three pie charts below show the changes in annual spending by a particular UK school in 1981, 1991 and 2001. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The three pie charts compare the total expense of a particular school in the UK during the
years
1981, 1991 and 2001. Use synonyms
Overall
, during the given period the teacher’ salaries remain the biggest expense, Linking Words
while
the Linking Words
amount
spent on other sectors was quite varied.
The total Use synonyms
spendings
used Fix the agreement mistake
spending
for
furniture and equipment fluctuated significantly during the given period, it started in 1981 Change preposition
on
with
15%, slumped to just 5% and ten Change preposition
at
years
later and it rose dramatically to 23%. Use synonyms
In addition
between 1981 and 1991, the Linking Words
amount
spent on insurance increased by just 1%, Use synonyms
while
ten Linking Words
years
later went up to 8%. Use synonyms
Teacher’s
salaries, which is the biggest slice of the chart, didn’t vary significantly, in 1981 represented 40% of the total spending, increasing to 50% ten Fix the agreement mistake
Teachers’
years
later and decreasing just 5% between 1991 and 2001. Use synonyms
Furthermore
, the Linking Words
amount
spent on resources Use synonyms
such
as books was 15% in 1981, peaked at 20% in 1991 and decreased to 9% in 2001. Linking Words
On the other hand
, the Linking Words
amount
spent on other workers’ salaries Use synonyms
gradual
decrease during the given time. It started at 28%, fall to 22% and later to 15%Change the word
gradually
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