Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology. In what ways has technology affected personal relationships? Has this become a positive or negative development?
Over the past few years,
technology
has become part of our lives. Some people
believe that the rising of technology
affected how people
interact. I agree that this
development brought up more good than warm.
With the advent of the internet and the new smartphones, communication became easier. Nowadays, video calls are not just easily accessible, but also
affordable. For someone
living abroad
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,abroad
this
might be the only way to get in touch with family and friends. Furthermore
, technology
allows the development of "dating apps", by using this
, a person has the chance to change text messages and get to know someone
before meeting them in person. For a shy person, that has trouble talking with someone
that never saw
before, Wrong verb form
seen
this
might be a good source to meet new people
, for example
. In additon
, Correct your spelling
addition
this
applications can Correct determiner usage
these
also
be used by someone
that have
just arrived in a new city to build new friendships. Change the verb form
has
This
development brings people
together that are living in different countries or by helping them meeting
new friends
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meet
Technology
can also
be considered dangerous. It is known that social media open a door for bullying among young children, for example
. Likewise
, "dating apps" can be used as a trap by people
without good intentions to seriously warm others. All these affect negatively how people
interact with each other. However
, I believe that with
the right supervision of children while using social media and responsible use of the application can overcome the Change preposition
apply
warm
that Replace the word
warmth
technology
might bring.
In conclusion, communication and relationships benefit from the progress of new technologies rather than being negatively affected. Despite of
, from my point of view, having to be used with cautions and responsibility.Remove the preposition
apply
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