You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You have a full-time job and you are also doing a part-time evening course. You now find that you cannot continue the course. Write a letter to your teachers. In your letter describe the situation explain why you cannot continue at this time say what action you would like to take You do NOT need to write any addresses.

The bar graph demonstrates the number of men and women in
further
education in Britain during three distinct phases and if were studying nine-to-five or regular working hours period. Overall, the majority of the students
further
education attended part-time courses
instead
of full time. The difference between them was more than 500 thousand people, not only men but
also
women. In the initial period, the number of males, who attended daylong and part-time periods, was higher than that of females.
This
quantity reached more and less than 50 thousand individuals.
However
, there was significant growth in these groups in 1980/81, when ladies got the highest level in the chart in comparison with the other gender.
This
trend of female attendance remained increase until 1990/91 in both educate methods, showing an incredible rising in regular working hours courses, with almost 1100 thousand of ladies. Meanwhile, the gentlemen, who went to nine-to-five classes, climbed during the given phase, differing from the other kind, which had a steady decrease in 1980/81, followed by a discreet recovery in the
last
yeas illustrated for the graph.
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The Greeting

Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.

Always start an informal letter in the ways:

  • Dear + name
  • Hi / Hello + name

‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.

For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:

  • Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
  • Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.

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