Some people feel that governments should take a large proportion of people' salaries to pay for public services such as roads and schools. Other thinks high taxes are bad. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Some
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believe that it is necessary for the
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to take a large percentage of
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's salaries for constructing roads and providing
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.
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essay will discuss both views but believes that high taxes are bad. On the one hand, there are two key reasons why the
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should impose a higher salary tax. The main reason is that it can provide citizens with better
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and infrastructures. When the
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receives more
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from the
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, they can use them in different areas
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as building a better public transport network and more public facilities like sports centres. Another reason is that it is beneficial to the underprivileged. The
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can provide some public
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or subsidies to society with the
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they received.
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, the poor can visit the public hospital for free when they are sick.
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, it can reduce their
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pressures.
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, there are two reasons why the
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should not impose high taxes.
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, it may reduce the motivation for
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to earn
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. When
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have to pay a large proportion of their salaries to the
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, some of them will think that getting subsidies may provide them
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higher income than having a job.
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, they will not be motivated to work.
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, it may increase the pressure for some
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with low
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. Some citizens’ salaries only merely cover their expenditures, if they have to pay a large part of their income to the
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, they may not have enough
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for living. So it may affect their quality of living. To conclude,
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high tax may provide better
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to
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essay still believes that its drawbacks outweigh its benefits.
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