Your child is going on a three day school trip to another country. The head teacher wants to find parents to go with the group and you would like to go. Write a letter to the head teacher. In your letter: Say why you would like to go on the trip Suggest what you could do to help during the trip Ask other questions about the trip

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Dear headteacher, I am Nar Arjun's mother. I am writing with regards
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school trip with the group. As my child is seven years old and he never
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without before me. I do not want to send him alone.
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I choose to be his company
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trip.
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trip is for three days which is
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so long for me as a mother. The secondary reason for my decision is
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because now during winters it is a long time of these days as it is in a hilly area where the chances of snow have existed in which small infants may need extra care so that they cannot get any fly by roaming without dress up according to the weather.
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help your staff with the look after others. I will always keep an eye on all students so that they are together and there will be no trouble.
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, I want to know about the additional documentation which is needed for parents and the charges for a single guardian or any other specific requirements. Hope
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hear from you soon. Yours truly, Nar.
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
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  • for example
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  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • enthusiastic
  • valuable experience
  • expertise
  • educational objectives
  • supervision
  • ensure safety
  • bonding
  • workshops
  • logistics
  • coordinates
  • travel arrangements
  • clear communication
  • support
  • responsibilities
  • manage schedules
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