You have seen an advertisement in an Australian magazine for someone to live with a family for six months and look after their six-year-old child. Write a letter to the parents. In your letter explain why you would like the job give details of why you would be a suitable person to employ say how you would spend your free time while you are in Australia Write at least 150 words.

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Dear Mr collin, My name is Ikram. I have seen your advertisement in the magazine yesterday, I am writing to inform you that I am really interested in the position that you are offering.

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of all, I really would like to work for you and your family because it will be a great experience to add to my professional resume,

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I have worked as a babysitter for a family who has three children for five years.

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, I am a person who admires travelling and discovering new cultures and meeting new people.

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, let me notice that I enjoy looking after children and I am amused by spending time with them since

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learned a lot from my previous experience. So I am very patient, Tidy, reliable and hard-working.

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, if I had the chance to work with you, I would spend my time visiting tourists attractions, tasting local foods and making new friends. Thank you for taking the time to read my letter. Please feel free to contact me if you need more details. Kind regards Ikram

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

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Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

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8 paragraphs

181 words

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Childcare, Nurturing, Patience, Creativity, Early childhood development
Babysitting, Au pair, Engaging, Responsible, Enthusiastic
Safety, Trustworthy, Adaptability, Proactive, Cultural exchange
Activities, Educational games, Language skills, Exploring
Volunteering, Community involvement, Australian culture
Flexibility, Personal traits, Schedule, Enrichment

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