You would like to buy some electrical goods at a shop in a nearby town. Write a letter to the shop and ask if they have the things you want or whether they will be able to order them. Ask what the prices are and how long they will be able to hold the goods for you.

Dear Sir, I, Swati Arora, resident of Apala Apartment. I am writing

this

letter to enquire about the goods kept in your shop as I am interested in buying the

products

from you. I have to buy a few Philip bulbs and the red wires which must be 100 meters in length. It would be great if there is the availability of these

products

so that you can send me at my mailing address. Sharing the price list will be helpful for me in choosing if my budget allows it. I would be delighted if I get some discount on my purchase.

Also

, I would like to enquire about the durability of the

products

because I am purchasing them according to the longer usage. I believe you will able to keep the goods with you until

week because I have some work and

therefore

I will reach at your shop to carry back the stuff along with me, and I think you are selling the

products

which come under warranty. I am hoping for your earlier response so that I can plan

accordingly

. Yours sincerely, Swati Arora

Submitted by Arjun on Wed Dec 15 2021

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