The maps below show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for its development.
The figures compare the current site of the Islip town
centre
and the planned development in the future.
We can see that the new design proposal involves making a few changes to the central area, mainly within the dual carriageway. There’s
not many switches in Change the verb form
There are
school
and housing places.
The most noticeable change is that there will be a dual carriageway circling around the Fix the agreement mistake
schools
centre
to connect school
, housing and Correct article usage
the school
the
Correct article usage
apply
park
. A walking lane which is only for pedestrians will replace the main road where the southern part of the shops will remain nearby. However
, the northern shops will be significantly expanded to a shopping centre
with a bus station and a car park
on both sides. Moreover
, the land on the east side within the centre
will also
be used for housing.
What will remain in the same southern position is the school in the west and the park
in the east except for a slight shrink in the proportion of the latter one. Housing will account for the largest part located in the south urban area, in and out of the carriageway, while
another new housing district will be established next
to the park
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