The maps below show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for its development.
The figures compare the current site of the Islip town
centre
and the planned development in the future.
We can see that the new design proposal involves making a few changes to the central area, mainly within the dual carriageway. Use synonyms
There’s
not many switches in Change the verb form
There are
school
and housing places.
The most noticeable change is that there will be a dual carriageway circling around the Fix the agreement mistake
schools
centre
to connect Use synonyms
school
, housing and Correct article usage
the school
the
Correct article usage
apply
park
. A walking lane which is only for pedestrians will replace the main road where the southern part of the shops will remain nearby. Use synonyms
However
, the northern shops will be significantly expanded to a shopping Linking Words
centre
with a bus station and a car Use synonyms
park
on both sides. Use synonyms
Moreover
, the land on the east side within the Linking Words
centre
will Use synonyms
also
be used for housing.
What will remain in the same southern position is the school in the west and the Linking Words
park
in the east except for a slight shrink in the proportion of the latter one. Housing will account for the largest part located in the south urban area, in and out of the carriageway, Use synonyms
while
another new housing district will be established Linking Words
next
to the Linking Words
park
.Use synonyms
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