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You are working for a company you need to take some time off work and want to ask manager about this.

#company #time #work #manager
Dear Manager, I am writing
this
 letter to ask permission about some
days
 off. Actually, My father was ill for the
last
 couple of
days
.
Last
 Sunday, when I took my dad to the hospital. I came to know about that ,my dad has to overcome
a
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surgery to get rid of the pain
Moreover
, I cannot leave him alone during
this
 difficult time. The surgery will be done in four hours but my dad will have to stay in hospital for the
next
 two
days
. So that's why I would need to take three
days
 off from the work.
Although
, we are five employees in designing department and I have told my colleagues about my situation and they gave me believe that they will not take any leave in the
next
 three
days
.
Moreover
, they will
also
 complete my pending work. I would be thankful if you would allow me three
days
 off and I
also
 apologise for the inconvenience that you are getting because of me.
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