You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Your family is going to move to another town. Write a letter to the Principal of a local school asking if they will accept your son. Describe his academic achievements and scope of interests. You do NOT need to write any address. You should write at least 150 words.

Hello Sir, Madame, I am writing
this
letter to inform you that my son
want
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to attend your institute. In fact, My family and I recently settled in your city where I found a new job. I like
also
to tell you about his formal performance and his personal preferences. Actually, we moved to your town
last
month with my wife and nine years old child. We were obligated to change our old address
,
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because I started working in an engineering company
next
to your school's building. My son is always
between
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the top three in his class and scored the highest grades
last
semester. He is very friendly and
respectfull
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respectful
respectfully
with his colleagues and his teachers.
In addition
to that, my kid
adore
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soccer and swimming.
Last
year, he participated in the national football competition for players under fifteen where he got
the
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first
place along with his teammates. I will be very
greatfull
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grateful
to your direction
,
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if it considers my son's academic background and other interests in order to include him in
this
year's program. Thank you in advance for your time and attention. Yours faithfully, Ali Hammoud
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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