Computers and modems have made it possible for office workers to do much of their work from home instead of working in offices every day. Working from home should be encouraging as it is good for both employers and workers. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answers and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.

Owing to the fact that technologies as computers and the internet have offered the opportunity for

workers

to

work

from

home

rather than spend their whole day at

the

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work

. Some people think

this

can be an advantage for both

workers

and employers.I Partly agree with the idea that working from

home

by using

network

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networks

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or other ways to complete the job is better than working from the

work

.

Firstly

. People need to communicate with others.Working from

home

can have an effect on their communication skills.

For example

, people tend to make a friendship with the others around them.

In other words

, in school students used to be friends with other students.

Similarly

, the coworker who works in the same company normally becomes friends.

Also

, its consider

healther

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healthier

to go to

work

than

work

from

home

because many

workers

can do some sport

in

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their way to

work

as walking or cycling while

this

is a hard thing to do

it

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at

home

. Another point to consider is that

,

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being able to finish the

Work

at

home

can be beneficial

to

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.Some employees complain about how fair their

companies

are.

Moreover

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the transport fee has increased.Despite the fact that

,

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many

companies

do not offer any extra money to cover the transportation cost. Many

workers

prefer to

work

from

home

to be close to their family

in

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on

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their special days.

Such

as, their children's birthday, which could be impossible for the office worker to attend since they have to complete the task before

go

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home

. In conclusion, from my point of view, I believe that if the

companies

used

this

technology in a good way as by reducing the office hours and allowed the employees to be more with their families without

affect

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their teamwork. At that point, I think

this

will be a great thing to encourage

companies

to do in the future.