Computers and modems have made it possible for office workers to do much of their work from home instead of working in offices every day. Working from home should be encouraging as it is good for both employers and workers. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answers and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.

Owing to the fact that technologies as computers and the internet have offered the opportunity for

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to

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from

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rather than spend their whole day at

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. Some people think

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can be an advantage for both

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and employers.I Partly agree with the idea that working from

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by using

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or other ways to complete the job is better than working from the

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.

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. People need to communicate with others.Working from

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can have an effect on their communication skills.

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, people tend to make a friendship with the others around them.

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, in school students used to be friends with other students.

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, the coworker who works in the same company normally becomes friends.

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, its consider

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healthier

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than

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because many

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can do some sport

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their way to

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as walking or cycling while

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is a hard thing to do

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. Another point to consider is that

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being able to finish the

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at

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can be beneficial

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.Some employees complain about how fair their

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are.

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the transport fee has increased.Despite the fact that

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many

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do not offer any extra money to cover the transportation cost. Many

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prefer to

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from

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to be close to their family

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their special days.

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as, their children's birthday, which could be impossible for the office worker to attend since they have to complete the task before

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. In conclusion, from my point of view, I believe that if the

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used

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technology in a good way as by reducing the office hours and allowed the employees to be more with their families without

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their teamwork. At that point, I think

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will be a great thing to encourage

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to do in the future.